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how did you make your picture big? that’s the thing that i’ve been trying to do..
anyways, your layout was nice…however, the colors that you used was not very reader friendly..the font was nice coz it has this very friendly appeal. make sure that the grammar check is on so that you won’t have few grammatical errors next time,
CJ that depend on what software you’re using!!!hehehe
Anyway back on Indra’s article, the creativity of your article is very nice I like it!!!!
I also like the way you pick you’re angle, There are some minor grammatical error just observe it!
Grade 91. :))))
Nash De Leon
Like CJ’s, I Think your presentation is also attractive. However, some parts of your article are hard to read because of the background colors of some post-its specifically the green and the red.
We have 366 days this year because it’s a leap yer.
I think that the title does not suit your article. It would be better to change it into something more reflective of your article’s contents.
I love the lay-out of your article. It is as if I am reading a magazine – a real one. Just be careful about your text colors. Some of them are unreadable. On the other hand, you have a third person point of view. This style is a good communication style to your audience because when they read it, it would look personal to them. I did not have any problem with your title. Godd work!
Your grade is 90.
i can’t read some parts of your article. nice ideas though!
very creative on how you made your article. however, i was not able to read some because of the background color.
very unique and creative posting your article however, my poor eyes can’t read the other parts of your article maybe if you used light colors as the background we can have a clear view. I think on the first part you have nice ideas too
your grade is 85
You have done it again! Cool and creative. But like what they have told you, it’s difficult to read this kind of article.. Please do it better next time…
You have a very nice layout but some of the parts I really cannot read much. It’s good that you consider your layout to encourage readers to read your work. You have minimal errors. I agree with you that resolutions should not only exist during New Year. I
Your grade is 89.
Nice presentation. I suggest that you could use light colors for effective readability. I also like how you balance your ideas. Nice work!!
i had a hard time reading your article, but nice try. try new colors next time 🙂
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