NOTICE TO THE PUBLIC:
In order to read my article, you are required to firmly hold the mouse and scroll the mouse wheel like crazy until you have reached the desired level of readibility..i think there is no zoom button here so please don’t try to look for it. Now, if my recommendation still doesn’t work, i suggest that you go find a nice, awesome computer that can withstand the force of HD Graphics..Have fun reading my article! 😀
onlinejournalism419 
your work is the coolest!
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Nash De Leon
CJ, I think one of your strengths as a writer is your skepticism. I think that’s who you are as a writer and that’s what would people remember you as. Your skepticism is a good thing because it is not offensive. It’s plainly simple and direct. Just goes through the heart and is effective. One point though to consider, I wish you could have saved the image in which the words at the end of the last paragraph were complete. This is much better than your previous articles especially the one which was also an image. I think you’re not loosing your edge as a writer. You are just undergoing those times when a writer thinks he’s losing the ink in his pen (i’m just being metaphorical). I liked the title and the lead of your article. It’s “nakakaloko pero nakakatuwa” as we would say in Filipino. I think you should reflect your humor more into your articles because your skepticism and humor would greatly blend each other.
94
This is a very different way of expressing yourself with the topic and I respect that, however you have to chose your words when you’re going to post it on a class blog site.
You’ve been honest, so blatant but in a creative way.
Grade: 89
ASTIG!!! This is better compared to the first one. I like the way you presented your article in this unusual style. Your creativity is really tested here. Great Job!
93!
very cool and unique post CJ!!! why you no pursue a english major after a journalism course
i like how you present your article, very catchy indeed. excelent work CJ!..
your Grade is 98
It wouldn’t be you if this one is a dramatic article. Your presented a side of second chances in a different angle.
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A signature type of article that only you can make 😀
Knowing that you eventually realized that your course is not really what you want, I still commend you on your unique writing style. You consistently surprise readers to the humor elements replete on your article. Your sentence structures are so expressively arrange, well-thought out. Just be aware next time of the technicalities. I couldn’t almost read the conclusion.
Believe me, you just need to accept the fact that you are meant to be a journalist.:)
Your grade is 95.
Your article is so weird – positively weird. Kudos to you. Great job. I had fun reading it and if there was a last song syndrome, your article is on my list. This article will be great in teen magazines so that young ones will also get inspired. Congrats 🙂
Your grade is 93 🙂
by the way, what is your title? I can’t find it?Sorry.
the title is “the art of surviving that second chance syndrome” it’s actually in the middle of the article..it’s very experimental.aejejeje
congratulations on your creative writing and layout style! also commend you for the bold move of moving the title in the middle….unlike the traditional positioning. but just be careful because it might be perceived as just a statement that is being highlighted.
i like!
your grade is 90
I admire your writing style 🙂 Nice Job! very creative ;D I agree with Candice, this write up SHOULD be place on a magazine :)))))
nice nice
94
They already said it all.
Nice Job! (95)
Seriously, this article is the best I have read so far. First of all, you have a very creative layout. Second, your writing style is great! You have captured your reader to your article. Third you have minimal mistakes. This can be posted somewhere and receive a lot of likes from people. Congratulations!
Your grade is 95
Again, Ilike writers who deviates from the normal..I like your style and creativity. however, do not focus too much on style, dig more into substance, I found your first 3 to 4 paragraphs extremely weird and somewhat bring..they have no connection to the main part or message. always make sure to deliver the message no matter what.
your grade is 91.